Scene Replace

I received a feedback by Jason and this is my response

 On my film I faced a problem in a scene where two actors have to be drug dealers. I wanted to recreate that scene but it depends if the actors are available.

I will replace it and add more detail because the one I made doesn't give any detail because the actors looked like they were just standing. I made an error on that scene. unfortunately I only had three hours to film and I was worried because the maximum length has to be two and half minutes.
To resolve this problem in future I will spend more time on filming.



I made an storyboard for the new scene but it depends on my actors if they have more time to film.

My new scene is when Actor A (main actor) running towards Actor B and Actor C (drug dealers) he will bump in to them and they will use flower or a paper with money (to make it look real) and drop it on the ground.
The alternative is Actor B will drop flower on him self (on his face)
This gives an comedy effect on the viewers.

Scene 2: This will be a continuation of the running sequence where Actor A interrupts a drug deal, accidentally. There will be a close up on Actor B (drug dealer), as he looks at the drugs and money that were knocked to the floor. As a result, he strikes on Actor A (main actor) in the face while Actor A tries to apologise. After being 'roughed up', Actor A resumes his rapid journey to try and get to class on time.